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Review of Blue M&M  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I really enjoyed this short story. Have you given any thought to making it into a long novel. You could show is all the embezzling and maybe have his wife have an affair or something with someone. Then finish it all up with the pill being found in the coffee.

I so enjoyed it and can't wait to read more of your work!

Keep Writing!

XOXOXOXOX
Bridget
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