This piece captures so well the experience of enduring ache. It is eloquent but direct and gets right to the emotion experienced (experiencing?) by the writer. The will to thrive becomes absent. The whole cleaved into a half.
The piece is excellent in its choice of words.
I hope your journey lands you on the shores of peace.
Write on.
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