I like the poem and how it is hopeful for her and how prayer helps her. I would like to here more about her life and what she is going through. It does a good job explaining how prayer helps her get through things, but needs more information on what she is going through and why she wants a better life.
I like how this poem makes me feel a variety of emotions. First it makes me feel sad for the girl because she has been broken a lot and is scared to love, but then it makes me happy to see that she is willing to break down her walls and love someone. I like how she is willing to put herself at risk for someone. My favorite line is, "I'am making this wrong be right". This shows that she will do anything to make it work.
I like the poem and how it shows that the mistress is hopeful that they can be together, even though she knows it will never happen. It shows what she wants and how they should be together, but how he found somebody else first. I really liked the personification in the poem, "your eyes speak to me" and my favorite line is "And join me in our bed, our bed of lies".
I enjoyed the poem. I really liked how it seemed like you had really got a car, but you threw in a plot twist when it was all just a dream. I also enjoyed that you could learn something from the poem. It shows that it's good to go for your dreams, but it's even better to do what you can and help others.
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