It has been my pleasure to review your work - I hope you found the review helpful.

"Keep stretching the envelope, until you envelop your dreams."

Dear Taryn,

General Disclaimer: My review is just my opinion, and is meant to be helpful. I encourage you to accept this opinion though - whatever your heart desires.

My Rating:

Title:The Mist From Waterfalls

Impression of Title: It tells us what the poem is about, exactly. I do like this title.

Spelling, Grammar, Punctuation: Your punctuation is consistent, good, and I found no errors.

Flow/Rhythm: I have to say that you did an excellent job with the flow and rhythm in this piece. You also did a very good job of making your poetry rhyme. It sounds natural when you read it, and it flows nicely. It was truly a joy to read.

Word choice: I love the words you use in this poem. The rushing cascade, how the mists tickle your skin, a sanctuary of peace, and a place of serene tranquility all jump off the page, and make this work of art come alive.

Suggestions: I think I'd be a fool to make any suggestions to improve this poem!

Overall: I enjoyed this immensely. You did a good job of writing, and your abilities shine through like a piercing light from above . I like the emotion that you put into this poem. Excellent job on this one, in my opinion, Taryn.

It has been my great pleasure to read and review your efforts. I wish you well, in All your future endeavors;
"Keep stretching the envelope, until you envelop your dreams!"

Sincerely,

LeBuert

Dear Taryn,

General Disclaimer: My review is just my opinion, and is meant to be helpful. I encourage you to accept my opinion, this time - whatever your heart desires.

My Rating:

Title: Cuddle Time

Impression of Title: It sums up the poem. It gives a real sense of what the poem is about, and I like that.

Spelling, Grammar, Punctuation: Your punctuation, grammar and spelling are all impeccable.

Flow/Rhythm: I have to say that you did a excellent job with the flow and rhythm in this piece. It sounds natural when you read it, and it flows nicely. It was truly a joy to read.

Word choice: You use the perfect words to make this poem come alive. They make the poem warm, and bring a real sense of comfort to the reader. This brings back memories of wonderful cold mornings with loved ones.

Suggestions: I can't think of anything to make this poem more inviting, comfortable or interesting!

Overall: I enjoyed this poetry very much, even though I prefer poems that rhyme. You did a good job of writing, and your abilities shine like bright silver in the sunlight. I like the warm comfortable feelings that I get when reading this piece of art. Excellent job on this one, in my opinion, Taryn. My first five star rating, and I never thought that it would be for a poem that didn't rhyme.

It has been my pleasure to read and review your efforts. I wish you well, in All your future endeavors;
"Keep stretching the envelope, until you envelop your dreams!"

Sincerely,

LeBuert