i like this. there is just something about it. something that can't be pointed out. the strongest lyrics are the ones that mean something. the ones that come from the heart of what the writer has gone through in life. i'm a big fan of music, and i don't see lyrics that reach out to me as much as i like. but yours did. so congratulations.
i've played the game since it came out. quite addicting if i may add. i am 18 now and a full fledged duelist.
one thing i noticed about this write up though is that i had to force myself to keep reading. it didn't hold my attention, simply due to the word choice. develope the scenes more, and allow us (the reader) to get into the minds of the struggling duelists. i have a fan fiction about a card series that i made for the game, but i can't post it because i'm at my portfolio limit. maybe i'll delete something and post it.
one thing i liked about this though is that there were the options we had. (duel disk, another/leo's house, allyway with signers). that was fancy.
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