I have never encountered this form of poetry before, and I must say that I like it better than a haiku! With this form, you have much more wiggle room with what you can say - or at least that's what I perceive.
Your poem is very deep and creative. I did have to read it a couple of times to fully understand it, but isn't that the case with good poetry?
Wow, you have quite the poetry portfolio! I could never write poetically, and I'm truly jealous of your obvious talent. Keep up your efforts in poetry! It could be a career for you easily. I would also like to see some of your narrative work. Are you strictly poetry?
I'm not exactly sure if this is a metaphor or real, but bowling is fun, I guess. Anyways, I agree with your overview about bowling being anger management. Hey, if it works for you, more power to you!
Interesting topic and perspective! I agree you with you completely- Television does cause obesity and depression. And there is so much violence and sex all over! Now to think, I must spend quite a few hours in front of the TV or computer every day, and I'm not happy with my weight.
Definitely started out slow, but man, did things escalate! You had me a little confused with Morgan being sick in the beginning, but it all made sense.
I think you have a real talent in erotica. I look forward to reading much more of your work soon!
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