Well, I liked the story. I believe the ending came a little bit suddenly compared to the beginning which was very well described.
The character of the police officer seemed a little unrealistic seeing as he was waiting at a train stop in a suit with his hand cuffs still on him. I think maybe an idea of him taking a train to NY to see his family or go to a funeral would be more likely or even if it was not a police officer at all and just a man who decided to help. Also the idea of the man not being a police officer would make more sense because he hesitated to help and she made eye contact with him before he decided he would.
You did more from past to present tense once in the sentence 'But last night was the last time he will ever hit me.' As you can see the 'will' where 'would' would be better and would keep you in the correct tense.
Overall, not too bad. I really liked the description and wording.
Keep Writing,
Anna
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