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Review of Last Winter  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It's very apt that you died in the winter.
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Review by graybabe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's reminiscent of the Hymn America The Beautiful but it has it's own take on America. I liked it, the words and the rhyme.
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Review by graybabe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I loved this story. It flows without a hitch anywhere. It's a sad story but I followed it through.
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Review of Simple Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A deserving woman would be happy to receive this poem from you!
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Review of PAIN  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Good piece. I hoped you had more to add.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I agree with everyone in the Shadows and Light that your deserves the first prize. It's very well done.
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Review of Promise  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very well done. I'm sorry that you had to leave. I hope happiness fills you someday.
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Review of The End Of Time  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Very descriptive.
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Review of I Wish  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I feel your pain. I hope you're alright now. You put everything succinctly and to the point.
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Review of The Sound of Ice  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
It's a humourous poem that is descriptive and gives the reader a great insight into what happens when you slip on ice. Good show!
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Review of Assignation  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is an interesting poem. It draws images of the path homeward where his love waits. I like it. Keep writing.
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Review by graybabe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this poem! That's all there is to say about it.
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Review of Weekly Goals  Open in new Window.
Review by graybabe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My weekly goals:

1. Write damnit write



2. Then see my shrink
3. Then see my therapist
4. Then collapse in a heap in my debris-laden room with both puppies at my feet, passed out from too much marrow treats.
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