Good job! I love the way you looked at nature and brought all its aspects into man's soul, his inner-most being. We want constantly to be in control of everything around us, including nature. Perhaps that's why we cannot control ourselves?
Grammatically speaking, remove the comma in "Ancient, wisdom" and you should be fine.
As a Star Wars fan myself, your title caught my attention and I like your storyline. You have a typo, "a pair of jean." Pluralize jeans. There are other grammatical errors that throw off the smoothness of your descriptions. The worst is "I always pictured Lando to be the kind of dog that was there to do more than just fix the hyper drive when I needed him to, someone I could really count on in a pinch." I've read that line 5 or 6 times and still struggle with it. You describe the character's immersion into the movie very well. I look forward to reading your revisions.
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