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Review by Sara J Rose Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is very beautiful, I would like to review it but I thought this would be more fun:

I look into the mirror
And I see someone staring right back at me
A lost little girl
With cold hard eyes
And no expression on her face
I see the pain she carries underneath.
A lost little girl
I see the anger in her eyes
I see the pain she inflicts
Because it's so easy to fall prey
A tear falls from her eye
I reach forth to touch the glass
Trying to wipe away her tears
I tell her she's beautiful
Because you see your flaws
So she wipes away her tears
She steps closer to the mirror
And I whisper to her
"What do you want to become?"

I hoped you liked it and don't find it offensive that I used your writing to form my own.
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