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Rated: E | (2.5)
This is an interesting idea and story. I enjoyed the mixing of our everyday concerns and relationships with a fairy tale.

I think the names of the King and Queen are wonderful. I laughed and nodded my head when I read about I Dont Know and I Dont Care. Great idea. There is alot of potential with just these two creations. I think they resonate with us.

I had a bit of trouble focusing in and relating to the story of the unreal people and the various tasks they must undergo to meet the king and Queen. I want to know a bit more about the Unreal people and why there is so much sadness.

I think there is alot here with the emotional experience in a kingdom and I would ejoy reading more about how the king and queen became I dont Know and I Dont Care and how the people became unreal and why the rain of sadness was so complete.

Thank you for writing this and for letting me review. Good luck
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