chicken12195's (chicken12195) Reviews

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#3362224

Review of Through the Storm

Review by chicken12195

Rated: E

| (4.5)

This was very entertaining to read, because I was Dorothy in the Wizard of Oz my freshman year. I like the difference you made with this; coming form Oz instead of going to it. You still incorporated the death of the witch and the stories the same, just that the scenery was switched. I really liked this.

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#3360977

Review of The Journey

Review by chicken12195

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

It was strange that the one person who wanted to stay at the island was in the boat that didn't make the journey. At the end, it seemed like instead of being found, they found heaven, which is what the light was. But this story was very interesting and I liked it a lot.

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#3360926

Review of Life is a Test, Love is the Answer

Review by chicken12195

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

This was absolutely amazing. The details you put in, the story line you told, the love I can feel pulsing through Mark and Olivia; you are an excellent writer. I can't say there's something wrong with this. This story was perfection. As I read, and you described the treatments he went through, his pain, the other patients; it made it sound so realistic. Brava.

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#3360897

Review of His love made me whole

Review by chicken12195

Rated: E

| (5.0)

This was lovely. This poem is true; Gods love can set you free and show who you truly are. You have an excellent way of expressing his love and affection.

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#3360893

Review of A Second Chance

Review by chicken12195

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

There was a part where the story got confusing, but other than that this story was amazing. I love the part where John Walton admits he's actually Ryan, and then you switched the accident situation. It was genius. I did get confused when I read the line "The next day"; I thought you were writing about the day after he graduated, but then I realized it was the day after his wife's birthday. Excellent work.

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#3359027

Review of Love Me, Love Me Not.

Review by chicken12195

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

I do think you should continue this story. At first I was a little skeptical, but the end really brought me in.

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#3350330

Review of The Forbidden Gem

Review by chicken12195

Rated: E

| (4.5)

You're a very good writer. I enjoyed this story greatly. I bet if you continue this story and put more detail into it, you could write a novel.

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#3350329

Review of Untitled

Review by chicken12195

Rated: E

| (3.5)

I was sort of disappointed with the ending. Not much of a climax or suspense. Is this story continued someplace else? It just seems...abruptly cut off. You're writing is very good though.