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I like to give helpful, honest reviews by focusing on the strengths of your piece. By understanding what we do well, we can improve the areas in which we have issues. I will not pick out spelling mistakes or grammatical errors as I believe edits usually find these. I focus on story, character, pace and style.
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Sci-fi Fantasy Children’s Teen Young Adult
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Review by Daniel Curry Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This resonates with me so strongly at the minute. Always trying so hard yet feeling like you never get anywhere.
I love the emotion in your writing, you have a real gift with giving words feeling.

Things sometimes get better
But then something else goes wrong

This is important and we must learn to turn it into a positive. That something else is just another lesson we can learn from :)

Stay strong and keep writing.


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Review of Stay  Open in new Window.
Review by Daniel Curry Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I love the idea behind this line:

Hands on the clock
My one enemy

This is a theme in one of my stories, in that time always moves forward, yet you feel you always move against it, and try to resist.

Really like the poem, and the feeling inside it. There is a real sense of longing and searching for peace that has been put across.


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Review of The Fun House  Open in new Window.
Review by Daniel Curry Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Overall, I really like this. It's suitably creepy, and has a suspense running throughout.

The two main areas of improvement in my opinion, would be to flesh out your characters a little more, make them feel alive and resonate with reader's childhood friends etc. and also to show what is happening not so much telling. This is especially mportant in horror writing as the suspense makes you read faster, sentences that are telling begin to sound like a list being read out.

I do like your writing voice though, and will be dipping into your other and future pieces.

Good luck!


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