I review every story or poem I read the same way, here is how yours scored:
Grammar [ 5 ] - I found absolutly no grammar mistakes, it was written perfectly.
Thought [ 4.5 ] - The poem provoked a lot of thought for me. I could almost picture a missed encounter with a person or fate. It made me think a lot about what the poem actually means; and to this moment, I'm still not quite sure.
Content [ 5 ] - It was exciting and kept my interest well. For a poem, this definitly ranks up with some of the most notable poets.
Details [ 5 ] - The poem gave plenty of details and insight into what you were getting across. I found myself feeling full and not needing anymore information. I also love that you added a footer explaining what Moirae, Zeus, and Europa are. I know many people probably would be lost if they had little or no knowledge of mythology if it weren't for you adding this.
Time [ 4.5 ] - It wasn't too long. The only reason it didn't gain a 5 in this category was because it could have been a stanza or two longer.
Overall [ 4.8 ] - Like I said before, I would rank you up with some of the top poets. The poem was stong on all points.
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