Wow. It was very interesting. One moment I thought he was a redator than the next a hero, than I thought he was gonna commit suicide and instead he snaps a picture. Very nice, really gave me a twist. Thank you, keep up the good work :)
Oh my good golly gosh! Amazing! So much detail! I get so enthralled with your work, this also defiantly makes me think of how technology has taken over the world. We've lost so much connection with one another and lost the meaning of having a life. Thank you so much! I love your work! It is so amazing! Keep it up. I've already read the Fun House. Now it's time to read all your others. Great work
So exciting! This gave me shivers. I couldn't look away at all! Very very nice suspenseful and scary. I like how you brought it even more alive with the comparisons to the past when they first entered. Keep up the amazing work!
In my opinion, I wouldn't say it was very enticing. Could have been longer and more exciting, maybe a fight between Squirrel and Blue Jay that could end up in ones death. I was excited to read at first but than became disappointed at the end. There was nothing to really grasp my attention or keep me wanting to read more. Overall okay just wish for more. Good luck
Hi Barnes.
I just finished reading your short story Charon City Blues, overall a good story in my opinion; however I would have liked a more visual of what the characters looked like and what their history is with eachother. Why does the sergeant and Chris not get along so well, was there an incident in the past that made Chris a liability to be in the police station? Overall a good story, just wish there was more background information. Good job, keep up the good work.
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