Here you come again, mom, with an incredible dark story. I read it twice. I understood about the name. So good. Goosebumps all over my arms. This one was very very good but The Chupacabra and The Red Door are still my favorite stories. My favorite part was when he and the creature talked. I liked the sentence It was like having a hole in an empty existence. I am proud of my mom. Cla
Mammy, this story impressed me so much. It is incredibly real. It is deep, it is fantastic. How do you write these things? Your imagination impresses me! CD
Of all your stories this one impressed me the most because I don't know who is who, what is what, when is when, where is where and why! I liked the character and his strange way, his actions and boldness but yet, who do I like better, the one here or the one on the other side. Congrats! Way to go!
Claudia
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