Mrwriter's (clued) Reviews

Mrwriter

Review Requests: OFF

12 Public Reviews Given

33 Total Reviews Given

1

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3698698

Review of Cresco

Review by Mrwriter

Rated: E

| (4.5)

That I did enjoy. Reminded me of a sci-fi piece I'm in the process of doing. Do you write any stories or is it just poetry? I've got a few in mind and have just finished the first draft on one. It needs alot of work especially with the characterisation. But I need to start somewhere. But I'd love to read more from you. Good job.

2

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3688501

Review of Race for the Zambian Title

Review by Mrwriter

Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

Yep. Another good one.

3

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3688497

Review of To Dance Upon a Dambling Morn

Review by Mrwriter

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Another good poem. That was really good. How long have you been writing for? If you don't mind me asking.

4

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3688489

Review of My Mind's Place

Review by Mrwriter

Rated: E

| (4.5)

That was good. I like the wording. It sounded very sweet. I can't say I've never wrote any poetry but I'm a little intrigued to now. Good work.

5

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3688482

Review of Stand through this

Review by Mrwriter

Rated: E

| (4.5)

It was very powerful work. Felt a little shocked after that one. I've got to admit. It was very good but I can see you have a lot of emotion for the friend you're writing about.

6

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3688478

Review of Reaching for the Stars

Review by Mrwriter

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Now that one was very good. It actually makes mine look well... I'm definately going to have to give that full marks. The imagery was really vivid. If it's not any problem, could you send me an email if you post anymore work. I'm new to the terms of writing and looking to develop some form of skill. I really did like that short story.

7

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3688477

Review of Star-Crossed Lovers

Review by Mrwriter

Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

That was really good. Quite actually liked that. The wording was perfect. I haven't actually read that much poetry so I might be a little biased but that was really good.

8

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3668354

Review of Some Enchanted Evening

Review by Mrwriter

Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)

Very good I must say. Firstly, I just thought he was an obsessive overly-protective boyfriend but not until last minute he'keeping her captive.
But I do have to admit, I did feel for the auburn-haired captive throughout the story.
To add, I think that's the best story so far. I do love a story with a twist. Personally, I think you should have kept that little treasure for a competition or something. It would have won.
Well done and I hope to hear more from you soon.