I very much enjoyed reading this humorous, unusual vampire tale. Upon reading, I didnt find any grammatical errors that I normally look for (its a pet peeve of mine, really)- so good job and lots of kudos to you! However,as a little constuctrive criticism, I'd like to offer a suggestion of maybe adding a little more descriptive detail/imagery. Overall, it was a very entertaining read, though, that I quite liked very much. Great job and keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. :)
Very interesting and intriguing. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. You have the makings of a possible epic fantasy novel here. I would love to read more. Great work! :)
You have a great idea and plot point here. Seems the latest craze are mediums (for example: the two television shows- Medium and Ghost Whisperer). I rather enjoy them, too.
However I think you should proofread. I found a few small grammatical errors and some spelling/typo mishaps.
Overall, good idea. I enjoyed the read.
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