Your poem was very clear and descriptive. I felt as if I was actually in the audience watching the children on stage. While reading your poem, the deep love and admiration you have for your son was very evident. I am not too certain about the ham fitted into your poem, but overall I found it to be a great piece that all mothers can relate to.
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