No disrespect... but I kinda facepalmed at the whole things lmao.
At the same time, I really liked it 'cause it was like some couple got drunk and said some kink stuff (daddy or princess one, not really "kink"... but it escalated quick).
Anyway, I knew you were not trying to do write it seriously (it's just an wish-fulfillment), but what I saw was not that "good" kind of story. So it were hard to rate it high (being unbiased was my thing)... or I should have not rated it from the start haha... Enjoyed this short read though
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