Wait, was the lady the surgeon operating on his wife? Well now, THAT is different! I think this was a very interesting poem you wrote here. I think it was very interesting how you included the words that the surgeon said in your poem as well as what was going on during the surgery. How did she fall and break her hip?
I like how you wrote this story. I think that it is very interesting and I hope to hear more about Thomas and Katherine soon! Do you have sequel pieces to this, or is it completely unfinished?
I think that you did nicely with this poem. Do you do any other poem work? If so, does it always rhyme? Try something a little different, as in a repeating poem, rhythm poem, etc. If you keep up the good work, I think that you will do quite well in life.
The storyline is very good, but I think that you should make a sequel. You left the poor readers hanging! I enjoyed it, though, and your piece is very descriptive. I hope to see another part of it soon!
Wow! Your story was very moving, and emotional. I loved it. I was very surprised by the ending. I am thinking it is a true story, which is probably true. Better than what I have tried writing before. I hope to see more of your work soon!
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