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Rated: E | (4.0)
hi corey allan

english ain't my mothertongue, so don't expect too much from this Review.
i really like the tone of your Poem, and i also like, that it speaks to all senses, putting me right into a smell, followed up by Pictures and later on the silence of it is broken by a choir, creaking Wood and shuffling, over to chords and a harmony that firstly just fills the churchroom, then leaving the Impression of a room, that ain't no room anymore, just Sound. in the first paragraph, where the silence is, i found many words that refer to a more scientific reality, like rays, particles, or atmosphere, captured in a non-moving state. That changes when the sounds roll in, then there's movement everywhere, in the Environment and inside the People singing and listening, and your words Change from scientific to spiritual. I think, that is very well done. The end of the Poem leaves me in an emotional state of freedom, it changed this antique church of no movement to a Point, where something escapes, alterating "room" itself into some Kind of fluid Thing.
Beautiful. I hope, I was able to Transport some of my thoughts, even in a strange sounding, close-to-english-but-no-english-english. Greetings crim
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