Hi Byronwrites!
That's a nice short story. When I started I thought Jessie was still a school girl, there's something really jovial about her. It's very sweet to read about this father that waits fir this weekly visit from his daughter and also very sweet the way she relates with him.
It has a good structure and is well written.
Hi, as a reader I felt compelled to continue reading after the intro. I liked the way you described the old man and the way he got to the library. I also like the words you're using. Carry on!
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