I haven't read an atmosphere that bumped me so in ages. Dark, thick, almost embroidered, as if I were fixed in a flying chair, in a 7D cinema. Neither said too much, or too less, the images all spoke for the characters. And although it's visual rather than kinetic, it is an action piece to the whole extent of the phrase. Though ..there's more to it, isn't there?
I hope you'll consider continuing it. Please. Place it inside a bigger universe, but of the same taste.
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