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Review of I am  Open in new Window.
Review by Orchid Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This piece is superb! I was riveted and drawn into every sentence. To structure your life's experience in this way is beautifully chaotic, and I am quite surprised that you aren't fond of writing. However, I am glad you wrote this. It's a masterpiece of self, no matter how tragic, happy, triumphant, or disappointing. Very well done!
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Review by Orchid Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I can identify very closely with this poem today. I too, recently converged into these realizations with an old friend of mine. This piece is very telling of the relationships we weave and how they truly are versus what we may imagine. Beautifully recounted, and my only critique would be that it could have flowed more smoothly. Keep up the great work!
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Review by Orchid Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
You have certainly done your criminal profiling research for this piece. The psychological observance in your writing is extraordinary, and refreshing. I love your use of metaphor and explanation, with the poem, in accordance with to killer’s mind and motives. Fantastic job!
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Review by Orchid Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
*Snow2**Snow1**Snow2* This piece flows perfectly! Each transition is like smooth silk. The great build up to the ending of this poem was brilliant! I will have to go read some other things in your portfolio. You may have put a hook in me. :)
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Review by Orchid Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Powerful! What beautiful metaphoric release, the set up of this piece is divine in the very best way. I've read many things using the subject/comparison of death but this is one of the best comparisons I have yet to lay my eyes upon.I just adore the lyrical symmetry. Amazing work!
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Review by Orchid Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I have to ask...where did you come up with such a brilliant poem? The imagery is perfect. Everything flows with flawless precision. Definitely in the top ten best poems I have read on this site. I read it 3 times just to appropriately soak in all of it contents.
Brilliant!
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Review of Dissolve  Open in new Window.
Review by Orchid Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow...it has been my pleasure to read this poem. You took a very unique, and complexly thought out approach to a common subject. Everything flowed perfectly. I cannot say I have ever read anything even similar in style to this particular piece. Marvelously done!
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Review of Broken  Open in new Window.
Review by Orchid Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem flows really nicely! I love the word choice in this! Especially these lines:
Broken wings,
Battered brow,
Belief she sings
Becoming now


They really open this piece to beautiful heights!
I have you on my favorites!!!! Keep up the great writing!
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