I really like the rhythm of this! I am attempting find a deeper meaning but it sounds like the critique of a jewelers work! Maybe a critique from the man who received it for a woman? It turns rather sad at the end, did he/she in fact turn their back on the jewelry?
I have lots of questions! But, that doesn't make this boring!
I myself love a little something that makes you think.
Real and bold is how I would describe this.
It captures the ignorance and the innocents of everyday.
Some take advantage of their last days, others contemplate.
This is a inspiration to pay more attention to our lives and our mental well-being.
Please continue to question oblivion.
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