Chelsea Hey!
Every person God creates, He creates for them a specific place and purpose, he has designed for you. No one else can fit into your place because it is uniquely yours. However, sometimes it takes quite an effort to find it. There are many hinderances as well, alternative places and other paths are ever beaconing you to turn aside and settle for less. But you will never be satisfied until you are in ,Your Place where you fit like a hand in a glove. M Paul Burress
A better written piece I have never read, and correct as well. I am an Evangelical Christian and have spent much time reading the bible and have fell in love with the Jewish people as a whole. I understand their part in the scheme of things, who they are,why they are ,and where they are headed. I have helped many return home from the former Soviet Union. Jews have certainly been a blessing to me.
I read your poem several times and since I am not familiar with your other pieces I will consider this one as if it were your only offering. It began dreamy and wispy in scenes so personal that only a connoisseur of imagery may get the full flavor, But, Oh My! you really hit your stride in rhyme, I loved it, you painted a scene I could see so clearly I felt a little guilty observing it. M Paul Burress
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