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Review by MozzerellaSticks Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
After reading the part with the brothers arguing and bickering, I have to say that whole part gave me a few good chuckles. I like how you gave them a bit more of a brotherly bond after the events of the first series. A big improvement from last time, I'd say :)
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Review by MozzerellaSticks Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a pretty great start to your short stories. The ending especially concludes with the fact that the brothers do in fact love each other, but have a little conflict as well. Looking forward to reading and reviewing your other entries in this collection :)
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