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Review of Waves  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
i like this because it was a peaceful and not a violent angry poem. very good imagery.
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Review of "Love"  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow. This is a very sweet poem. my favorite lines were...

Love comforts us in sadness.
It hears us in times of need.
Without it we'd be much less!
For in us it plants it's seed.

very good job!
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Review of Youth Grown Old  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I thought this poem was amazing. I never thought something about growing up could sound so beautiful. the lines
"The youth begins his journey into time
And must face the world and its whims,
A world which is often ugly and unkind"

are definitely true. This was very well written and a joy to read. I'm not a big fan of rhyming, but this story had a way of makeing it work. The details made me feel like it was happening to me, in stead of a character. Thanks for sharing, I hope to read more of your writing soon.
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Review of A Ghost Story  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
She was the ghost. i like this story. very detailed.
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Review of My Haiku #001  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
good message.
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Review of Old Mother Tree  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
this poem is very detailed. i like the descriptions in all the stanzas. there was no weak point in it
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Review of MEMORIES  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
this is really short but its deep
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Review of Gonna Get There  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem is beautiful. it is very deep. its so descriptive.
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Review of The Silver Fox  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I like this. it has great imagery. i felt like i was there
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Review of Gangsta D's Anger  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dalvin this made my day. it is hilarious and to the point
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Review of I Am  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
i liked reading it. it was short sweet and to the point. I can relate to it because i love guns too.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
i dont know much about world of warcraft but this was hilarious. i like how it says this sweet mage killed six. its contradicting. this song completely made my day and is now stuck in my head.
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