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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a beautiful piece from a gifted writer. Thank you for sharing.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Brenda
Your song is tender and touching. After a first reading, I read the description and read your beautiful words a second time. Truly, a loving gift.

Peace,love, and Merry Christmas.
BLS
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great twist. You built the suspense perfectly. Well written: no spelling, grammar, or punctuation boo-boos. Nicely done.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written satire, but what a bunch of meandering claptrap. The five stars are for the writing, not for what you wrote.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great satire. As with all satire, exaggeration is key; to that issue, you have done an excellent job. With an informed voting public, you will have four more years of President Trump's great leadership to write about.
The 5 stars are for the writing, not the message.
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Review of Acting Badly  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Your piece is a perfect example of people I know. Great work.
There is one thing you may want to look at: the title. "Badly", not "Bad."
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Review of Hunger Pangs  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This bit of ghoulish fun will be with me on my future camping trips. Thanks (lol). The way you went about building what I knew was going to happen, but hoped would not was perfect. Great stuff.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great fun and most rewarding contest on WDC
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Review of Those Poor Kids  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (3.5)
Are you suggesting that those poor kids should collectively take the gas pipe?
I hope your message is directed at those sorrowful adults who have done little to promote independent thinking and leadership.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is a very well written story of a story that has been told so many times. A gentle reminder to men who begin thinking outside their box.
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Review of The Fog  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Not much of a story until the last few words sealed it wonderfully. Nice work.
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Review of A Far Off Land!  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
All I was able to conclude from perusing your words is how unhappy you are. for that alone I feel obliged to cheer you with a few GPs, and do try to enjoy what He has given you; I am certain He is sad that you are not happy with where you are.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Your words to some are fighting; especially the last line. But to others, like me who do not believe words written thousands of years ago to put meaning to unanswered questions are a rational way to live a life. I appreciate your message. I find sonnets to be most difficult to create. I applaud your efforts.
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Review of Bête Noire  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
The guy in your tale has a problem. He rips himself a new one, and then, from what I can pull from your words, turns his back on who he knows he is with no intent on making the changes you so perfectly outlined.

I enjoyed your poem, but found the rhythm off, making it not the smoothest of reads. I am by no means a poet, but I do understand that there is more to a poem than rhyming lines. That being said, your poem is probably a better piece of work than I am an aficionado of the art.

Best,
Bobby


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Review of Snow Fairy  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Mom,
This is a sweet and warm tale that will surely touch the hearts of young and not so young alike. Snow Fairy is beautifully written and delivers, a meaningful message. Thanks for sharing.

Best,
Bobby
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very clever. Well thought out. Why am I rating this 4.5? I'm changing my rating to 5! "Through The Jungle Lightly" is a fun read to be enjoyed over and over again.
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