A beautiful poem, the pain comes out without building up of rage that is but natural, and the blunt acknowledgement of the ill effects of todays hectic world have been clearly brought out by the poet, the words are simple and used effectively to enhance the anguish of the poet.
It is a beautiful poem, it conveys a lot about belief in god. The words are chosen carefully and portray the meaning clearly and simply. The flow is smooth. The underlying theme is well conveyed and the depiction of faith leaves the power of god in the heart of the reader.
It is a nice poem, it conveys a lot of meaning . The words are chosen carefully and convey the meaning clearly and simply. The flow is very smooth and the poet may well convert it into a song! The underlying theme is well conveyed. A tale about a pet is really touching the readers heart.
An excellent piece of biographical writing, expressively told in simple and elegant words.The writer has a very good command of language and weaves the words in a mossaic of action. The practicality of a situation is at the base of the story where in it says that some times one has to do what must be done!
I think this article has been well thought of, composed and crafted. The words used are simple to comprehend and the topic has been well reasearched.
The thoughts expressed are very clear in content and flow is easy.Such topics need to be discussed in detail and it is essential to do so today.
One of the best war short stories I have read in a long time, it has the ingredients of a powerful story teller who keeps a reader waiting for more, it has lot of emotion, it is almost heart wrenching to read, and a powerful end, depicting life as it normally is on ground for a soldier!
An excellent piece of advise , told in simple, straight and elegant words.The writer has a very good command and weaves the words in a mossaic . The topic has been very carefully and excellently dealt. The authors appear to be masters of the subject!I think this should be read by all.
Beautifully scripted a sweet lovely short poem, the imagery is very beautifully utilised to bringout the underlying theme of the poem. The words are used very effectively and are simply constructed for a better understanding. The poet has taken the reader through a canvas of a painter and it comes live in front of our eyes.
It is a very good poem, it conveys a lot of concern for nature . The words are chosen carefully and convey the meaning clearly and simply. The flow is very smooth The underlying theme is well conveyed and the moral of the poem leaves the power of decision with the reader!
It is a nice poem, it conveys a lot of meaning . The words are chosen carefully and convey the meaning clearly and simply. The flow is very smooth snd the poet may well convert it into a song! The underlying theme is well conveyed and the moral of the poem leaves the power of decision with the poet!
A true lover of god and as his worshipper, the poet has composed an excellent poem, which can be easily putto music and sung in praise of the lord. A lovely ribbon of thoughts holds the poem together and makes it memorable.The words are used very effectively and are simply constructed for a better understanding.
Apparently a love poem written in a very straight forward manner, leaving no ambiguity in the mind of the reader as to what the poet wants to say, I found the poem very sweet. The words are used very effectively and are simply constructed for a better understanding.
A faith poem written in a very straight forward manner, leaving no ambiguity in the mind of the reader as to what the poet wants to say, I found the poem very sweet and appeared to bubble out of the heart of some one who loves god and has complete faith in him.
Powerfully scripted short poem, the imagery is very strong and utilised to bringout the underlying theme of the poem. The words are used very effectively and sentences constructed in a simple manner. The poet is adept at saying a lot by using minimum words.
Beautifully scripted a sweet lovely short poem in the honour of the Lord; the imagery is very beautifully utilised to bringout the underlying theme of the poem. The words are used very effectively and are simply constructed for a better understanding.
Beautifully scripted a sweet lovely short poem, the imagery is very beautifully utilised to bringout the underlying theme of the poem. The words are used very effectively and are simply constructed for a better understanding. The theme of the poem leaves the reader thinking about various shades of a persons life!
Powerfully scripted short poem, the imagery is very strong and utilised to bringout the underlying theme of the poem. The words are used very effectively and constructed for a ulterior purpose of bringing out the effect. The poet is adept at saying a lot by using effective words.
It is a very good effor to pen down a complex subject into a poem, it conveys a lot about the poets ability to go into detals. The words are however a bit difficult for a casual reader to comprehend though they portray the meaning clearly . The flow is smooth.
It is a nice poem, it conveys a lot of emotional pain . The words are chosen carefully and convey the meaning clearly and simply. The flow is smooth.The underlying theme of lost love is well conveyed .The poet has been able to induce the feelings he wanted in the heart of the reader.
It is a sweet and lovely poem on nature, it conveys a lot about nature. The words are chosen carefully and convey the meaning clearly and simply. The flow is very smooth. The underlying theme is well conveyed and the beauty of the nature described by the author is lovely.
. It is a nice poem, it conveys a lot of meaning . The words are chosen carefully and convey the meaning clearly and simply. The flow is very smooth snd the poet may well convert it into a song! The underlying theme is well conveyed and the moral of the poem leaves the power of decision with the poet!
Very sensual, and leaves nothing to imagination as to what must have transpired, beautifully told in simple language and excellent choice of words.The last lines are the truth personified and the reader is thereby made aware of the theme of the poem. Lovely work.
This is an excellent story told from the point of view of an old lady and what she must be feeling. The story is very lucid , told in simple straight form, the build up is gradual and the ambience is natural.The story is not erotic in the sense that it does not leave one with a juicy expectation. The story is philosophical and there in lies its beauty. An excellent work.
Beautiful poem, a well written, with an underlying morale, the choice of words is very good and meaningful. The poem leaves the reader with a lot to think about.Thepoem borders on the metaphorical, and the idea of the strenght being available to the author is lovely .It is an excellent work.
Beautiful poem, the choice of words is very good and meaningful.It is a lovely work.There is acceptance of the inevitable, and thre in lies the beauty of this poem. The attempt to see the world from mare's point of view is very good and very probable. The use of simple words adds to the beauty.
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