It is not difficult for anyone to feel somehow identified with this story, it reaches in a very personal way. A life that will never be, a dream shattered, and a broken heart. It touches deep, where most don't want or dare to look. Nicely written and smartly told. The way you jumped from the beginning to the end and vice versa is appealing to the eye and the mind. A Short, but complete story in which you succeeded to portray loss and longing, love and loneliness, pain and the lack of any. A unique piece, a slice of a person's painful moment
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