Poetry in a sense can be both easy and challenging to write at the same time, with that being said; your use of visual references was quite impressive and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I've not read a love poem that sent shivers down my spine before and it was one of the most beautiful pieces I've read.
This story is very interesting, not to mention quite visual. For a short story to impress me as much as this does, it takes a lot of work and you definitely managed to blow me away with this. I would like to thank you for creating something that is not only scary but also visually stimulating.
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