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Review of Time  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (3.5)
Very fascinating even though I don't really understand it. Like the way its form is unbounded by consistent rhyme or rhythm.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very interesting, lucid, and engrossing essay on a subject I know little about (In fact I've never even heard of the Eko-Atlantic project before my encounter with this essay). Informative, concise and eminently well written.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Very well written. Especially like the line "Good enough reason to be shot, revived, then shot again." very well formed sarcasm which is not an easy thing to create (believe me, I've tried). Only thing I would point out is the part where Hertz is looking at the two bereft children it is stated that there is no emotion etched on their "sad" faces, but sadness is an emotion and therefore this statement is a little confusing. Otherwise this is a very good excerpt. Makes me actually want to finish the story and I, as a rule, hat Sci-Fi.

P.S. The GP's are incentives for you to continue.
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Review of Darkness  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
Amazing. A masterful interweaving of poetry and prose.
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Review of Vandal Eyes  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Excellent. I give it a 5 star for execution and 4 for idea.
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Review of Manthano  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Incomparable. I have never read the work of any other author that could articulate thought and feeling as you do. Wish I could give it more stars.

P.S. I don't rate everything thoughtlessly. When something
touches that certain cord in my heart, I have to say so.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Amazing. That's all I can say about it.
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