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Review of Way To Go - 2  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
a great write...I like the form and meter. I must learn to write sonnets. I dont have much experience with them.

i quickly identified with "rage at the dying of the light" line.

you captured a deep emotion in this work.
write on.
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Review of What is music?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
a great write and a visual delight!...nice rhyme scheme (except in stanza 4..."bomb" and "climb"...not exact rhymes, but what the hey!)

all these things are music to me. A good write which makes you examine the depth of sound and what we call music.

brilliant.
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