Truly an excellent Pony Weight Gain adventure. It's really extensive and very entertaining; every story thread takes me on an adventure that truly engrosses me it's words. But, as I've said before, I've yet to read a perfect story, so this story has it's gripes, or rather, just one gripe: you really need to edit chapters and fix any spelling and grammar errors, primarily those made by other authors who add to this story. But, otherwise, I love it.
Love, it! But I have a few concerns. Why exactly did you hafta make the mansion storyline so sinister? I know it's really popular, but, personally, I don't liek unwilling weight gain, like Fontina getting cursed. Now if she enjoyed getting fat, then I'd enjoy it some more. And if the weight gain was a little... what's the word I'm looking for... little quicker, I'd really love it. You think you can make a storyline like that? I'd make one myself, but, and correct if I'm wrong, but for weight gain to be enjoyed by the reader, it has to be in detail. And I'm not good at writing out details. Anyway, if you could make a story where Midnight, Ali, and Fontina either enjoy getting fat, or are willing to pack on the pounds, I'd REALLY appreciate it. And I'll give ya some gift points. Whadd'ya say? ;3
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