Wow. I don't have much to say other than wow. This was an amazing read, well worth my time. I call myself a Christian, and I try to live a life God would want me to live. But I am in love with another man. This has always troubles me. I believed the self righteous, arrogant assholes who try to bend the world of our Lord to their own meaning. (Pardon my language)
Now down to the nitty gritty. My judgement on the story itself.
You've certainly opened my eyes. The organization and presentation of the work were well put together indeed. I certainly felt compelled to continue reading through the entire work. I hope to soon read more of your works. I didn't notice any grammatical errors, although they sometimes allude me. Spelling seems in order. The topic was relevant and informative as well as persuasive.
I really enjoyed it. Good work.
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