A very good picture painted to celebrate the persistence of doing good. The bible says not to be weary of doing good. It has to be a decision and a determination to want to do good around us, and as we do not relent in our acts of love, the devil has no choice but to flee from our environs. Great portrayal of scripture!
I find this a captivating introduction to an intensely profound literature on one of the vital human elements which is 'inner peace.' Man is constantly battling with his identity, and this corners him to a point of restlessness, helplessness and frustration. It sounds like your upcoming book will help its readers to find and maintain the treasure they need for a successfully balanced life. It all starts in the mind. It is a beautiful and strong introduction. I think you are right on track, as your statement of purpose is here made clear.
'...just because you don't see the wings doesn't mean you can't fly...'
A very deep motivational! I like the fact that it appeals to your core. You get to see a glimpse of the REAL you; a realization of self-worth and knowledge of the possibility of taking strides atop the ladder of success.
I love the steadfastness in bond between Skinny Dragon and his patient.
How unfortunate she left him, but hey, her memory lives on! Hope alive, very important.
Nice one there.
Music, oh music!
Beautiful poem...echoes the bliss and tingles derived from music.
Music is indeed soothing to the soul, it transforms, it guarantees, it liberates, it ushers in...uh music.
I particularly love this part:
'No other feelings can be as sweet.
As violins putting my mind at ease,
As the harmonious sounding beat.
Pleases me with a uplifting peace.'
Nice peom.
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