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Review of Poem about Brian  
Review by Deepthy
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow, Lovely poem! The best word I can use is bittersweet. Did you show this to your mother? She would have loved it. Again, sorry for your loss. Remember the good times, forget the bad. Remember the pleasure and you'll never be sad.


Great work. Hope to read more of yours and feel free to check out my port too!

tc
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Review of Almost  
Review by Deepthy
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hey christina! A bit bitter with the world huh? Anyways, liked the idea and theme...its different from the usual stereotype ideas...Okay, I'm a 17 yr old and don't profess much knowledge in the writing and reading dept. especially when ppl like you must have started ages before me. What I thought was you had mentioned the story you are stuck with. Maybe you could ask someone from here to beta it for you? One of the senior members..they might be glad to help you out with your writers block...You could also go to some free ebooks site, read a couple of them and get inspired...Hope this helped you...All the best!
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Review of The Nanny  
for entry "Chapter One" 
Review by Deepthy
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hmm.....till now the story is pretty average. Its pretty typical you know, the master of the house falling in love with the nanny...of course, you just jump started the process a bit. And i think the grammar could be improved a bit more and a little more description could be added....right now the story seems to be a bit rushed...but its still a good romance story...Do continue with it, after all Practice makes Perfect!
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