A very good piece. I like the way it just places you down in the middle of the situation, stating things as they are without any explanations. And though it is a short piece, I get a very good feeling for the writer of the letter and who she is, as well as her relationship with her brother. The inclusion of the aside regarding the relationship as children is a very nice touch. Good work.
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