An excellent story! You give vivid descriptions that draw me in and make me feel as though I'm the one laying in that bed. When Daryl brought up that his wife was killed by a drunk driver, I almost immediately figured that it was Thomas that was the drunk driver. Then as the story comes to a close and reading about Daryl actually being comatose the entire time...I didn't see that coming at all! Keep up the good work!
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