very very nice
i look forward to reading some more of your stuff
but i too wanted to hear the answer to Usuna's question!!
if i may humbly add one critique-be careful with your descriptors:
-there was some redundancy
-some were not in sync with the descriptee
-some phrases could more effectively be replaced with a single word before the object of description
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