The Quivering Quill's (donniemiffy) Reviews

The Quivering Quill

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#4335303

Review of A Child's Innocence

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

So well written, bringing the awesome indignity to a very heightened result. From the beginning, I had a strong feeling of who the monster was. Having written several pieces in this vein, I know the fear and impassioned please which accompany. The last two lines are the definite clincher, bringing you into the picture in a fear laden, impassioned cry.

Please review any or all my pieces here.

Thank you very much!

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#4332226

Review of Drift Off to Dream

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Beautiful. A mother's prayer for her little one. This brings back sweet remembrances of so very long ago, yet just last night. Oh, if everyone could have these same remembrances, especially of the covers pulled so safely and securely up to the chin each night, and a mother's undying love!

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#4332225

Review of Hearts Know What to Say

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hearts for sure know what to say. Sometimes they need a little extra push from a smiling mouth or a reaching hand. But, hearts always know what to say.

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#4332223

Review of Her name on my lips

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Beautifully written, with perfect (and unique) wording. Pictures perfectly drawn with the ease which love can provide, and the anguish which it leaves behind. The composition draws from true emotion, beginning to end, with a perfect story line totally encompassed by the sweet and tart ending.

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#4331958

Review of Fun facts with the great Dr. Seuss

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Fascinating pieces of information,and very comprehensive, astute questions. Have you ever read The Little House books? They are fabulous, with history and real life family recounting. Besides that, they are written in such a manner that this old bereft mind can fathom (lol)!

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Review of When Day is Done

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Very emotional, and very realistic. So many truisms here, and sad thoughts which can definitely by turned around. The title is perfect!

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#4329579

Review of Open Window Beside The Bed

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Fascinating piece on time, and an open window. The pictures you draw here are perfectly painted with especially well chosen words. A piece which I will definitely remember, and recommend!

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#4329507

Review of Why?

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Amazingly emotional with real life sense. Your powerful words have produced in me so many memories which comprise shattered dreams. Your essence is shown so clearly here, in the passion which you display, that I can feel your pain. So powerfully written, from the beginning, throughout your gradual transformation, to the inevitable loss. This is one piece I could see myself having written, so many times!