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Review of Pretense  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
SUPER ITEM
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Review of Pretense  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
WOW!!! This is a great item,Hits both the heart and the mind at once.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is all very true and nicely written,The only thing i may think about revising is(If you have sinned even once). The bible says "All have sinned and come short of the glory of God" So theres no( IF) .We are all sinners already when we are born,and Jesus died for our sin.When we except Christ as our Lord and Savior that sin is washed away.
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Review of Poem  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
WOW!! another Hit right out of the park. This one so relates to my previous that it scares me.Wonderful writing,I couldn't have said it better myself.
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Review of Cuddles & Kipper  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
What a nice childrens Item,Brings back memories when my mother use to read winnie the poo to me.Thank you and God Bless
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Review of Oblivious  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a really nice item. How it use to be with blind dates, and asking for a real date.
Funny how things change over the years.Now It's just "hey i like you,You want to hook up"?
Nicely written and heart warming. Good Job
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Review of A Wink  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This piece is heart touching,Nicely written,and fits for many. Good job!!
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Review of Tragic Love  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice piece,captures the reader and won't let you stop reading till the end.Good Job,You need to write more items
Your an excellent writer,I would enjoy reading any of you items.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is an interesting view point of one individual,but gives many mind thoughts for someone that is not a christian
and doesn't believe that the Bible,ie;the word of God was provided for man to have a guide to live by.It challenges ones mind process. It opens a new thought process for some to argue against Hell and the devils existence.
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Review of Latt'e  
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Kind of relaxes the mind just to read your small item, good job
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Review of Lost  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a sad but wonderfully written story,it makes one think about our loved ones that we have lost and all those great memories we have from when they were living,yet sad that some of them had their lives cut short.Really a good job writing this story true on not.
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Review of Puppets  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is really good stuff, reminds me of our politicians in washington being the puppeteers,and we being the puppets
that they slowly distroy.
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Review by OUT OF HERE
Rated: E | (2.5)
This is a good start to a full blown story,Why not continue on.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Good story,keeps the attention of the reader to want to read more.Would like to see more from this writer.
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Rated: E | (2.0)
Anything that hurtful to someone else is bad.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is a nicely written item,all of us have closets with things hidden in them,weather it be the heart or the mind.
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