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175 Total Reviews Given
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I do my best to give an honest assessment of what I'm reading, I don't nit pick on spelling and grammar but will mention something that is glaring and should be pointed out.
I'm good at...
Reading,Writing but not so much Arithmetic. I like to walk and seeing what is in my sight line.
Favorite Genres
Mystery, Thrillers, Nature and whatever comes along
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Review of December 2024  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi Mari.lara - I've read you peace, actually I've read it several times, trying to understand what you've written. I think I can see where you are coming from, and I hope I'm getting the correct meaning. I did not see any grammatical errors tho I'm not the best one to point those things out. Your story is different but good, and I hope you keep writing. Best of luck
lucky dog
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Review of Blackmail  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Purple Holiday Princess
I've read your peace and found it funny and interesting. Nice choice of subject matter, and both of your characters sounded real. You made it enjoyable to read. My only concern was you left me wanting more! You did a good job, so keep on writing
lucky dog
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Review of Failure  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening Anna
I share your analogy of the word Failure. I've struggled with the same feelings. You encapsulated the feeling one gets when they succumb to those thoughts. Good Job
lucky dog
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Review of Heat  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi QueenNormaJean snow
I've read your peace and found interesting and enjoyable. It was easy to ready and flowed superbly. You did a good job. I hope to see more of your imagination in the future.
lucky dog
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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
HI Recardo
I've read your essay and I found it interesting, and enjoyable. Your take on life is somewhat different than mine, but that's what makes the world go around. You did a good job. Keep on writing
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Review of singing  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi snailpebbles
I've read your peace and I did enjoy it, though it's sad. Sorry you had so many disappointments but understand how you've expressed yourself. My only suggestions would be to put a space between paragraphs it makes it easier to read. You might want to put in the quotation marks where someone is speaking to you or you're asking questions. Keep writing!
lucky dog
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Review of Old Days  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Ricardo
I've read your essay, and I did enjoy it, and the story flowed well. I think you did a. good job. I don't know that I felt the depth of the passion you wrote about. I seems to be missing something and I can't quite put my finger on it. I'm not being critical, just an observation, and I wish I could let you know what it is. You've got a good peace and I hope you keep writing
Lucky Dog
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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi bmandal7 I enjoyed your story, brought back memories of my progression, but that was a long time ago. You did a good job keep up the good work Keep writing.
lucky dog
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Review of Footprints  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Jo Painter
I like your poem and found it easy to read. I also like the substance you used in your writing. You did a good Job, keep on writing
lucky dog
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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
HI Rainplot336
I've read your peace, in fact I read it a couple of times. I have not read "O Me O O life" by Walt Whitman, so I'm not sure where to start.
I'm getting the feeling you're expressing some of your thoughts with those of his, but you're moving in a lot of directions. I won't say I fully understand where you're coming from but I think I get the most of where your story is going. Keep on writing
lucky dog
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Review of New Hunter  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good Morning hihohyena
I've read your story and it was interesting. It flowed well and was easy to read. I enjoyed it, and look forward seeing more of your writing. I didn't see any grammatical errors, but I'm not the best one to ask, It looked good. Keep on writing
lucky dog
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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi amy-Has
I'm looking around the site and chose yours to look at. I know all about hiatus's since I had been on one. Sharing thoughts on Halloween and wondering whom might come to your door. I've been here for seven years and we don't get any trick or treaters. Most of the families with children go to schools or churches, I believe it's safer.
Have a great Halloween when it comes!
lucky dog
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Review of The Shepard  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Ambience24
I've completed reading your poem, and I enjoyed it. I think you did a good job and I found it easy to read.
Keep up the work and continue writing
lucky dog
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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Good Morning Leo
I've completed reading your story and though not a fan of fantasy genre, I found your story interesting. For me it was a little hard to follow all of the characters, but I still enjoyed your story. I hope to keep reading your work. Have a good day!
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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.5)
hello Lucifer
I've read a few poems and sonnets over the years and yours is the first I don't get the meaning of. This is the first philosophical writing I've come across and I'm trying to figure out what you're trying to tell me.
I'm sure the problem is mine so all I can say is keep on writing and I'll check in at another time.
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Review of Strength  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi IE
What a gripping story you've told. It was interesting and an easy read. You did a great job, and felt compelled to finish it. You kept my interest all the way through. I have no faults to relate, just joy to have had the pleasure to read it
Lucky Dog
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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I'd like to join your site and filled in the questionnaire but it came up error message. Not sure what the problem was or is
Lucky Dog
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Review of Untitled  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello William McPoetry
I've read your poem and I like it. I had to read it through a few times but (I think) I know where you're coming from. Person or Birds is the question,
Keep up the good work - write on
Lucky Dog
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Review of Mowing  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello Rainyplot
I've read your story several times over, trying to understand what you're saying. I think you're talking about dreams and thoughts of things around you or a city.
The only discrepancy I found, was the wrong word in the 5th line of 2nd paragraph. The word after multifaceted (Would) should be World (maybe).
I'm not exactly sure what you're trying to convey, but I didn't find it. The problem may be with me, so keep on producing and I hope to check in again sometime. Thank You
Lucky Dog
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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.0)
Hello Uncertainly
I've read your peace but I'm not sure what the meaning is. I'm a senior citizen so forgive me for not giving you a better review. I don't have anything bad to say but because I don't no what you're trying to say, it's hard for me to give a constructive review
I'm sure someone else will get it, but I'm not that person.
Have a. good day and keep on writing
Lucky Dog
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Review of God Only Knows  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
HI Amethyst Angel
What a compelling story, I certainly enjoyed your characters and the dialogue. It was well written and easy to read. I hope you continue the good work
Lucky Dog
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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good Afternoon True Echo
I've read your essay and find it thought provoking and sincere. I think you need to space your paragraphs to make it easier to read. Your content is good and I'm that great on punctuation and spelling but it looks ok from my untrained eye.
Keep up the good work
Lucky Dog
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Review of HAPPINESS  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Naomi - Thought I would come your way since you've giving me a try. I enjoyed your thoughts and word's about happiness and what makes you happy. These are words of wisdom and I like the way you shared your belief. It was an easy read and uplifting. Keep up the good work
Lucky dog
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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good Afternoon Jawaz
I've just had the pleasure of reading your story. It was sad but good, and maybe not the ending I was hoping for. Your story was easy to read and flowed well. I find it easier to separate the paragraphs with a space.
I'm not the best when it comes punctuation but it looks pretty good.
You did a good job, and I hope to see more.
Lucky Dog
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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I'm back Foxtale and I'm glad I checked out your space. You captured the essence of your story with an upbeat flair. Real life makes for good stories, if you can remember them.

Good Job again it was interesting and again an easy read. You captured the feeling of the whole story very well. It's easy to see why tears filled your eyes along with Calypso Man it was very poignant.
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