there is only one word i can call this poem with...CUTE!
it a cute poem to me signifying a teen romance, gave me an "aww" moment through the opening two lines and captured my attention and DEMANDED that i read the it two times before i give this review
i really liked your free style of writing made me feel like i'm actually listening to the story rather than reading it.
the earlier description of yourself was interesting, indeed, it made me want to punch you when you scolded Angel (this in a writing to make their readers involved is an accomplishment, congratulations!)
All in all, a nice, touchy/emotional (maybe that's 'cause i'm an emotional person, but i had watery eyes till i reached the end), a nice piece or work
A very nicely written poem.... it will be even better if you organize it into stanzas so the reader may comprehend the mood and rythm of the poetry. :)
Regards,
Dreamwriter...........
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