I really enjoyed your poem. I have many of the same feeling when it comes to the mistreatment of the world. Although, I feel your thought is powerful as is. I also found it interesting that it was just as powerful if leaving off the last stanza. To me, to be able to maintain such emotion throughout the poem is a gift.
I found this to be quite profound. I can completely relate to this interpretation. I have been held in a moment forever only to have it gone in a breath of reality. I really enjoy those that can hold the mysteries of the world in your thoughts. Please continue sharing.
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