Wow! I loved the structure first off. The use of repeating lines while dealing with all these different thoughts was wonderfully done. The subject matter itself was raw and beautiful. Wonderful job. Thank you so much
Thank you so much, it seems harder and harder to find poetry thats not self indulgent drivel. The imagery was fantastic, the tone perfect. I loved everthing about this poem. Again thank you for putting effort and thought into you writing, your passion and care come through in every line.
You have touched on thoughts and feelings that I can certainly relate with. It seems so insane that we take our frustations out on the ones that we love the most.
Gods blessing to you, Thank you.
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