Great story! The images you present are well-defined and, in many instances, keen. One that really resonated with me is the screen door. My grandmother's house had one just like it. A long spring closed it with enough force to make one jump. The sound it made when it slapped shut had sort of a ringing undertone that may have been caused by the spring. It was a complex sound which, when I close my eyes and listen, I can still hear.
Again, this story is a fine piece of work. Write on!
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