I cannot offer but one possible correction - one that may be wrong, but I'll share it nonetheless.
The primary belief is that the plural of 'fetus' is 'fetuses'.
Though there is another school of thought that dictates that any unit name that ends in 'us' is then substituted with an 'i' making the plural 'feti'.
Dictionaries say 'fetuses' though. I would suggest that as a correction.
Otherwise, it's a wonderful topic to discuss, though a review space would not be the place for it. There are a number of other aspects and arguments that would illustrate varying beliefs.
Good luck!
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